Kia Ora Hayden, This is really good piece of work. You have clear sentences and they are easy to understand. Next time you need to put capital letters on the names of the planets. I think you did a great job on this piece. Ka Pai! Kind Regards Hannah
Hi Hayden, Indi here. Great job. I love that you have put lot's of information in it. Next you could carefully check your punctuation because the names of the planets don't have capital letters. Ka pai to tuhituhi!
Kia Ora Hayden, Wow I learnt a lot like how Jupiter has over 60 moons. and I never knew the clearest object in the sky was the moon. By the way you wrote hi Saturn
Wow Hayben this is really cool. I didn't know that jupiter had 60 moons from Jordyn.😀😊😁😁😁
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hayden,
ReplyDeleteThis is really good piece of work. You have clear sentences and they are easy to understand. Next time you need to put capital letters on the names of the planets. I think you did a great job on this piece. Ka Pai!
Kind Regards Hannah
Hi Hayden, Indi here. Great job. I love that you have put lot's of information in it. Next you could carefully check your punctuation because the names of the planets don't have capital letters. Ka pai to tuhituhi!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hayden.
ReplyDeleteThis piece of work has got lots of information. Next time make sure you reread to make sure it makes sense. Ka pai
Kia Ora Hayden,
ReplyDeleteWow I learnt a lot like how Jupiter has over 60 moons. and I never knew the clearest object in the sky was the moon. By the way you wrote hi Saturn